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Her Name -- Was Silence by ~15stitches:icon15stitches:



“Her Name – Was Silence”




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She smiles with snow eyes on nights like these
the lip gloss long faded from light-rose lips.
And ponder she does, growing all the more curious
as to which way she'll fall into sleeps abyss.

No chemical could replace the delusions of heart
nor strengthen the weakness she holds so close.
Tonight she tumbles alone on the couch,
undressing with thoughts unfamiliar to most.

She dreams away the most recent of memories,
in silence, she's sleeping, the Quiet One.
Lost in a world she has created
she no longer sleeps at the Rise of the Sun.
©2008-2009 ~15stitches
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Author's Comments

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This isn't finished, or at least it doesn't feel finished.

I will work more on this, but it is something for now, lol.
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:iconlilmorbidprincess:
you are right. It seems to be waiting for something. But I like it so far. Good Work

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"No artist is ever morbid."~Oscar Wilde
"Anything is better than to be alone."~Evenesence
:iconpixalias:
same thoughts... fantastic beginning... for myself, my thoughts tend to say that I wouldn't take it too much further, maybe one or two more stanzas, because mainly i like the simplicity of the length... the meaning is there and fi you reach too far, i think it may give room for less to think about or less chance to read it twice, or three times, like i did... fantastic words, really love the flow... :+fav:

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:icondiscontentbeauty:
It is great so far...... :highfive:

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