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                I have seen words hidden,
                                laced like a bad trip;
                                made up like an expensive whore,
                                and deep-dreaming.
                But when analyzed,
                                they blow away like sand in a storm.



                I have seen these words.
                They speak to a part of me
                                the part that begs for sugar and violence;
                                               for hundred-some-odd feet
                                               of languidly liquid meaning
                                                                      that I would willingly drown in.


                I have seen words bitten,
                                chewed like cheap meat
                                              stretched across hollow bones.


                But these words,
                                They reveal meaning.
                                               In irony,
                                                                in pen-made-punctures,
                                                                                     and paperclip nooses.
©2009-2010 ~15stitches
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Eh. The structure I have it in on my .doc file doesn't stay with DeviantArt. I hate that. Even when you "Download" it, it doesn't show the original style anymore. That sucks. So, do pardon the structure issues as I had to space-bar in all the indents, etc.

Just wrote it. Having a bit of a rough and tumble day. I am also procrastinating my last WCSU assignment, heh.

*shrug*

Thanks for reading :)
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I actually enjoyed this piece, especially the second paragraph. Awesome!! :teddy:

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fantastic... i really love the colorful descriptive words for each stanza... kind of transgressive

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Thank you!

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